"I lost you somewhere in my head tonight In the middle of a thought? hurtling down sleep that came visiting in tunnels. Falling, making hollow dissonant noises only feeling all the while that it were in soft wispy motion forward first then back like a feather in flight. "
hey, u could not have plagarised, I wrote the stuff on the back of an envelope a few days ago...just the similarities with your work resonated.... or was it i who got subliminaly inspired...;-)
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"I lost you somewhere in my head tonight
In the middle of a thought?
hurtling down sleep
that came visiting in tunnels.
Falling, making hollow dissonant noises
only feeling all the while
that it were in soft wispy motion
forward first then back
like a feather in flight. "
Little bit same to same?
Chandan~ Yeah, but I swear I did not plagiarize.
That is a nice poem. :)
hey, u could not have plagarised, I wrote the stuff on the back of an envelope a few days ago...just the similarities with your work resonated.... or was it i who got subliminaly inspired...;-)
Chandan~ Oh I am sure you are quite capable of doing this absolutely on your own. :)
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