Wednesday

Eyes

Her hands worked on the dough with craft. Long slender fingers forming a fist occasionally to flatten the dough cake in the other hand. She sat besides the stove. Her hair long and tied up,with a single lock flowing down her face,it curled with such elegance as only the best of nature's creation can show. Her forehead sharing the even tan of the rest of her face was flat and gave way,as one went parsing further down,to a pair of eyebrows so perfectly curved, so appropriate in the variation of their thickness along the curves that I found myself completely mesmerised by their radiant beauty. Her eyes,large,black,like blackberrys looked like they belonged to the deer form paradise. Loosing one self into the pools of her black eyes seemed only too easy. I could not help but dive into those black pools so often that it would only be a surprise if she did not notice this intrusion of mine. Her eyes met mine with an oftenness which made it only too obvious that she had found an admirer. Her nose straight and her jaws a perfect triangle, her lips looked like petals placed on seasoned copper. An occasional smile made her cheeks go dimpled and her eyes sparkled with the brightest part of a radiance.

Time had come to part, and I wasn't in conflict, the meeting looked complete and whole. Though not a word was spoken. I sat in the car, she had come out to the verandah. I cast my gaze on to her, this time without a laspe or a look away, she did the same, for now it was within nobody's capability to notice. I am yet to forget the innocence I saw in those dark pools.

18 comments:

Differently Challenged said...

Wow!
U raise the bar once again my friend.

Sagar said...

DC~thank you, Glad you liked it.
You know, when I decided to make a post out of this girl, I was very ferverently wanting it to be very good, for it would be such a pity if I could not convey the sublime nature of the beauty I experienced,through my words.

Chit said...

innocence?

Chit said...

DC- isn't the description reminiscent of that shop-girl in Matheran?(at least for Sagar)

Sagar said...

Chit~ No it didnt remind me of any thing, the experience was new in the truest sense, not from a stale memory.

gomse said...

your best so far.... really good.. i wonder who the girl is..

Sagar said...

gomse~My best so far? then this is a good thing, for I so wanted this to be my best one.
The girl lives in a small village I visited during my vacations.

Anonymous said...

mothaa maanus zhalaas rey tu,
aamhi ikde phaaltu madhye phasloo.
nivaanta paney lihin,

Sagar said...

anon~dnanyawad! :D

Differently Challenged said...

Chit~ I thought of the same girl when I read this, But wasn't sure if Sagar was alluding to the same one.
Glad to know that I wasn't the only one thinking along those lines.

Now the pertinent question is, was Sagar referring to her in some subconscious way, when he saw this other girl in the village?

Sagar said...

DC~No I was not.

Chit said...

He's lying! :D

dhun said...

this is cool! one more thing to tease sagar about!

Sagar said...

you people do this because Im vulnerable to such things, What kind of friends have I?

:P :P :P

Differently Challenged said...

with friend like us, u don't need Enemies.
maybe just some anons to comment.

Chit said...

Bwahaha!

:d :d :d

Sagar said...

DC~well yes, I believe. :D

chingachgook said...

hey! that was fun... ya and more to tease sagar with heheheh
You know that lock on her face thing is true... when you tie up your hair and one lock naturally falls off it looks really pretty .... after that those stupids made a fashion where the girls keep one lock deliberately on their face its quite ridiculous.

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